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The New Steel God

Post by Lilthal on Fri Dec 12, 2014 5:30 am

Name: Steel Assortment
 
Rank:] D-ranked
 
Cost: 10 (5)
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic
 
Class: Offensive
 
Effect: The user uses metal to create a weapon of their choosing. The weapons are created when the user holds their palm out flat in front of them and the weapon in question forms from their skin.  Shields also form from the skin but instead of from the palm, it is from their forearms.  It can vary from weapons to shields which at most will be 5m x 5m. If weapons, then said weapon will moves at 10 meters per second and has a range of 6 meters. Increases attack by 20% and does Extra D ranked damage. If a shield, then it will be able to withstand up to D ranked damage.
 
Duration: Instant/until destroyed
 
Cooldown: 2 post cooldown.
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Name: Dead Steel

Rank:] C-Ranked

Cost: 20

Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic

Class: Offensive

Effect: This spell allows its user to create two large sleek blades on each hand, they form between the knuckles of the index finger and ring finger; though the user can also just summon one at a time. These blades can span up to 2 feet long and are razor sharp. They can withstand all but the strongest attacks. They move at 9 meters per second and do C-Ranked damage.

Duration: Instant

Cooldown: 2 post cooldown
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Name: Steel Manicure
 
Rank:] D-Ranked
 
Cost: 20
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic
 
Class: Offensive
 
Effect: The user can coat their nails in a special metallic alloy emitted from their body,  that enhances their striking capabilities. The nails can also be used as somewhat of a long ranged attack, either extending outward for slashes or shot off in something akin to bullets. Either method gives the user a 15% boost in attack and does C ranked damage.
 
Duration:
 
Cooldown: 2 post cooldown
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Name:  Absolute Abandonment
 
Rank:] C-Ranked
 
Cost: 20 (10)
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic, Steel Assortment
 
Class: Supplementary
 
Effect: The user having trained tirelessly in heavy steel, they have shaped their body to make up for the heavy weight, however when they abandon all steel, save for a single weapon, their speed increases. Abandoning their steel greatly enhance the user’s speed and mobility. Given the nature of this ability, the user cannot use this if they are fully encased in steel. Grants the user a 50% increase in agility.
 
Duration:
 
Cooldown: 2 post cooldown
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Name: Steel Skin
 
Rank: C
 
Cost: 20|10
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic
 
Class: Supplementary
 
Effect: This ability allows the user to convert the tissue of their entire body into an organic steel-like substance.  They are able to transform into this armor-like state at will (the process is virtually instantaneous); once in the armored form the user remains so until they consciously will themselves back to normal or when their magic is depleted. If the user is rendered unconscious, however, they spontaneously reverts to their normal form. While in the armored state, the user possesses the same degree of mobility that they do in their normal form.  However because of this form, the user loses the ability to summon anything steel until this state is released and they revert to normal.
 
Duration: Sustained/until destroyed
 
Cooldown: 3 posts
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Name: Steel Brute
 
Rank: D
 
Cost: 10|5
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic, Steel Skin
 
Class: Supplementary
 
Effect: After transforming into this armored state, the user possesses vast superhuman strength.  This only happens when the user is in this state and if broken, they lose the ability to gain access to this trait. Increases attack by 20% and does Extra D ranked damage.
 
Duration: Sustained
 
Cooldown: 3 posts
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Name: Steel Casing
 
Rank: C
 
Cost: 20|10
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic, Steel Skin
 
Class: Supplementary
 
Effect: Upon activation, this spell allows the user’s body composition to shift even further. Physical attacks of C-rank or lower will simply pass off them, nullifying any damage that would be dealt by them for as long as this spell remains active.
 
Duration: Sustained
 
Cooldown: 3 posts
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Name: Steel Conductors
 
Rank:] C-Ranked
 
Cost: 20/10
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic
 
Class: Offensive
 
Effect: The users encases their legs –ankles to high thighs- in a thin layer of steel. However the user can break the casing of steel around their legs into a long thin steel conducting wire, along the entire conducting wire is equally spaced steel thorns –the space between these thorns is an 1 inch-, however to keep these wires in check and under control the user leaves the last strip of steel around their ankles intact.
 
Duration: Sustained/until destroyed
 
Cooldown: 2 post cooldown
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Name: Steel Thorns
 
Rank:] D-Ranked
 
Cost: 10
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic, Steel Conductors
 
Class: Offensive
 
Effect: By twirling in a circular motion at high velocity, the user can use theses conductors’ fire out small pointed rods of steel. The rods are about 2m x 2m in size and can travel a distance of 5 meters at 9 meters per second. They do D ranked damage.
 
Duration:
 
Cooldown: 2 post cooldown
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Name: Infinite Chain
 
Rank:] C-Ranked
 
Cost: 20
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic, Blades, Steel Conductors
 
Class: Offensive
 
Effect: By briefly deactivating Steel Conductors –having them reattach around her legs-  to let it charge, the user begins to rotate rapidly firing thorns in all directions, being able to damage the opponent(s) and herself if not careful. Does C-Ranked Damage
 
Duration:
 
Cooldown: 4 Post cooldown
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Name: Steel Rose
 
Rank:] C-Ranked
 
Cost: 20
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic, Steel Conductors
 
Class: Offensive
 
Effect: The user’s ultimate form of Steel Conductors, this is a last resort for the user.  The user releases the steel conductors around her ankles and lets them encase her in her own thorns, in a few moments the thorns are released and a new form is taken.  This form the user has dawned a helmet that covers most of her face, leaving her mouth exposed, she wears a bodice of steel, and her hands up to her form arms are also covered in steel, and however these steel gloves leave her fingers exposed.  At her back are two steel wings that are centered on her shoulders but float mere inches away. The wings of this form, float mere inches from the users back and are part of the main force, they are connected by the thorn conductors that the previous state used, and these wings are in fact swords that can be used once the spear has been destroyed, however only one can be pulled from the conductors at a time. The one amazing thing about this form is that the steel shines gold, the one massive drawback is however that the user can not access any of their other abilities while in this form and must stay in this form until it is destroyed.
 
Duration: Until Destroyed
 
Cooldown: 3 post cooldown
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Name: Steel God
 
Rank:] D-Ranked
 
Cost: 10 (5)
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic
 
Class: Supplementary
 
Effect: Steel God allows the user to summon a full set of armor, from the surrounding area and from herself, the armor itself allows the user to be fully clad in pitch-black armor and a rustic helmet with a thinly carved slit displaying the ghastly glow of red eyes. The armor succeeds in granting it an air of formidability and a fine construction. It is a perfect armor that can be called neither exquisite nor crude, and it instead perfectly melds magnificence and functionality. The armor does allow for mystery as to who could be behind the helmet.  This Armor set greatly increases their stamina and defensive capabilities. Increases stamina and defensive by 20%. Can withstand up to C-rank damage. However unlike Steel Skin the user can use weapons in this state but can’t use anything else.
 
Duration: Until Destroyed
 

Cooldown: 3 post cooldown
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Re: The New Steel God

Post by Tsukiya Ishida on Sat Dec 13, 2014 7:05 am

Steel Assortment- 5m x 5m seems a bit large for the shields if they are connected to you. You'd be lugging around a 15ft shield. Either reduce the size of the shields or make it so that they are stationary after you create them.

Dead Steel- Approved.

Steel Manicure- State the range and speed that the nails can travel if used as projectiles.

Absolute Abandonment- Approved.

Steel Skin/Steel Casing- Having both of these as separate spells seems pretty MP intensive. My suggestion would be to combine the effect of Steel Casing into Steel Skin, since presently it seems that Steel Skin only gives you metallic skin and nothing else. This is only a suggestion, however, if you're okay with these two spells as is then that's fine.

Steel Brute- Approved.

Steel Conductors- I'm a bit confused as to what exactly this spell does. Does it create spiked chains connected to your legs? Is the spiked metal covering your legs? Can you give me a bit more clarity so I can know how to grade this properly.

Infinite Chain/Steel Thorns/Steel Rose- Holding off on grading these until I understand the predecessor spell a bit better.

Steel God- Approved.

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Re: The New Steel God

Post by Tsukiya Ishida on Mon Dec 15, 2014 4:33 am

(Clarification gained via PM and Skype conversation. Also be aware that you have to train these spells)

Steel Conductors- Approved.

Steel Thorns- Approved.

Infinite Chain- State how far and how fast the thorns travel.

Steel Rose- State that the swords deal C-rank damage if used as such and that they can be destroyed by 1 C-rank or higher of damage.

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Re: The New Steel God

Post by Lilthal on Mon Dec 15, 2014 11:30 am

Name: Steel Assortment

Rank:] D-ranked

Cost: 10 (5)

Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic

Class: 

Effect: The user uses metal to create a weapon of their choosing. The weapons are created when the user holds their palm out flat in front of them and the weapon in question forms from their skin.  Shields also form from the skin but instead of from the palm, it is from their forearms.  It can vary from weapons to shields which at most will be 2m x 2m. If weapons, then said weapon will moves at 10 meters per second and has a range of 6 meters. Increases attack by 20% and does Extra D ranked damage. If a shield, then it will be able to withstand up to D ranked damage.

Duration: Instant/until destroyed

Cooldown: 2 post cooldown.
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Name: Steel Manicure

Rank:] D-Ranked

Cost: 20

Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic

Class: Offensive

Effect: The user can coat their nails in a special metallic alloy emitted from their body,  that enhances their striking capabilities. The nails can also be used as somewhat of a long ranged attack, either extending outward for slashes or shot off in something akin to bullets. Either method gives the user a 15% boost in attack and does C ranked damage. If used as bullets, they have a range of 6 meters and can go 3 meters per second.

Duration: 

Cooldown: 2 post cooldown
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Name: Steel Skin
 
Rank: C
 
Cost: 20|10
 
Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic
 
Class: Supplementary
 
Effect: This ability allows the user to convert the tissue of their entire body into an organic steel-like substance.  They are able to transform into this armor-like state at will (the process is virtually instantaneous); once in the armored form the user remains so until they consciously will themselves back to normal or when their magic is depleted. If the user is rendered unconscious, however, they spontaneously reverts to their normal form. While in the armored state, the user possesses the same degree of mobility that they do in their normal form.  However because of this form, the user loses the ability to summon anything steel until this state is released and they revert to normal. Physical attacks of C-rank or lower will simply bounce off them, nullifying any damage that would be dealt by them for as long as this spell remains active.
 
Duration: Sustained/until destroyed
 
Cooldown: 3 posts
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Name: Infinite Chain

Rank:] C-Ranked

Cost: 20

Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic, Blades, Steel Conductors

Class: Offensive

Effect: By briefly deactivating Steel Conductors –having them reattach around her legs-  to let it charge, the user begins to rotate rapidly firing thorns in all directions, being able to damage the opponent(s) and herself if not careful. Does C-Ranked Damage

Duration: 

Cooldown: 4 Post cooldown
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Name: Steel Rose

Rank:] C-Ranked

Cost: 20 

Requirements: Steel God Slayer Magic, Steel Conductors

Class: Offensive

Effect: The user’s ultimate form of Steel Conductors, this is a last resort for the user.  The user releases the steel conductors around her ankles and lets them encase her in her own thorns, in a few moments the thorns are released and a new form is taken.  This form the user has dawned a helmet that covers most of her face, leaving her mouth exposed, she wears a bodice of steel, and her hands up to her form arms are also covered in steel, and however these steel gloves leave her fingers exposed.  At her back are two steel wings that are centered on her shoulders but float mere inches away. The wings of this form, float mere inches from the users back and are part of the main force, they are connected by the thorn conductors that the previous state used, and these wings are in fact swords that can be used once the spear has been destroyed, however only one can be pulled from the conductors at a time. The swords deal C-rank damage if used as such and they can be destroyed by 1 C-rank or higher of damage. The one thing about this form is that the steel shines gold, the one massive drawback is however that the user can not access any of their other abilities while in this form and must stay in this form until it is destroyed. They travel 15m/s and can go up to 20m from the user’s current position. 

Duration: Until Destroyed

Cooldown: 3 post cooldown

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Re: The New Steel God

Post by Tsukiya Ishida on Mon Dec 15, 2014 11:50 am

Spells approved for training. Link back here when done.
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