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Marwolaeth Cleddyf

Post by Hollrage on Sun Oct 05, 2014 1:52 am

Name: Marwolaeth Cleddyf

Rank: D

Cost: 10

Requirements: Re-Quip

Class: Offensive

Effect: This creates a sword that has a 1.4 meter blade along with a 30-centimeter long handle. It is mostly black, but some aspects of it are green along with the edge. It can be destroyed by an attack equivalent to 1 C-Rank and moves at 10 m/s when used (unless a higher rank spell affects its speed). Sword

Duration: Until destroyed

Cooldown: 2 posts


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Re: Marwolaeth Cleddyf

Post by Linedwell Rainrex on Sun Oct 05, 2014 2:05 am

- Take out the "sword" at the end of your spell. Any C-ranked spell can potentially destroy your blade if it happens to make contact with your weapon.

- Please add "this swords swings at a top speed of 10 meters per second", or some variant of this sentence.

- Your cooldown can be less than 3 posts with a D-ranked spell. It's up to you if you want to change this though.

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Re: Marwolaeth Cleddyf

Post by Hollrage on Sun Oct 05, 2014 2:17 am

-The sword part is just an image reference and yeah, I understand. Unless you want me to specify any c-rank spell. I assume it is assumed.

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Re: Marwolaeth Cleddyf

Post by Linedwell Rainrex on Sun Oct 05, 2014 2:43 am

Approved for use
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Rank D Spells -Marwolaeth Cleddyf spells

Post by Hollrage on Sun Oct 05, 2014 11:28 am

Name: Lladd

Rank: D

Cost: 10 MP

Requirements: Requires Marwolaeth Cleddyf be active

Class: Offensive

Effect: This allows Hollrage to produce a green aura around his blade, allowing his next attack to produce a vicious, precise slash of the energy that extends out to 10 meters, moving at 10 meters/second. It is purposed for slicing things apart, and acts as an extension of Marwolaeth Cleddyf's swing. It acts as if there are two slashes hitting the same point simultaneously, but only if it is used at point blank, otherwise it is just a slightly stronger extension. Basically, this does not override the damage of the sword it only acts as an equivalent to its damage, but at point blank strikes it acts as two swords of equal power hitting at once.  

Duration: 1 post

Cooldown: 2 posts

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Name: Mathru

Rank: D

Cost: 10 MP

Requirements: Requires Marwolaeth Cleddyf be active

Class: Offensive

Effect: This creates a silhouette of a hammer around Marwolaeth Cleddyf, and on the next strike it acts as a large hammer, sending a shockwave of force from it in the direction it was swung. The hammer is, from each side, 2 feet long with a curved limb. It is, vertically, 9 inches long and the only silhouette part that has this significant difference in shape and size is the hammer part. The shockwave moves out to 1 meter at 10 m/s. This is capable of blunt, bludgeoning damage.

Duration: 1 post

Cooldown: 3 posts.

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Name: Drywanu

Rank: D

Cost: 10 MP

Requirements: Requires Marwolaeth Cleddyf be active

Class: Offensive

Effect: This allows Hollrage's next stab to extend the blade, creating a 4 meter extension at 10 m/s.  The extension is the shape of the blade and goes away after a post. This is capable of piercing damage, as it is precise and specialized for a thrusting motion, like a spear.

Duration: Instant

Cooldown: 2 posts


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Re: Marwolaeth Cleddyf

Post by Tsukiya Ishida on Sun Oct 05, 2014 1:29 pm

Lladd- Change the duration to 1 post. Is the damage from the sword applied with this spell as well or does the damage from this spell override the damage from the sword?

Mathru- Change the duration to 1 post. State how large the hammer is, it still has to have a size even if it's a silhouette. State how fast and how far the shockwave goes. State what kind of damage this is capable of inflicting. (keep in mind the spell rank limitations when doing this)

Drywanu- Change duration to instant. State what type of damage this is capable of doing.

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Re: Marwolaeth Cleddyf

Post by Hollrage on Sun Oct 05, 2014 1:48 pm

Done
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Re: Marwolaeth Cleddyf

Post by Tsukiya Ishida on Sun Oct 05, 2014 5:40 pm

Lladd- Approved.

Mathru- After some discussion, it was discovered that this is a multi-functional spell. The silhouette is fine since it's simply an aesthetic change, as is the attack since it is the actual damage component of this spell. However you'll need to either take out the 25% increase or change this to a sustained damage buff (which would just add D-rank damage on top of the damage inflicted with your sword) or have it as a projectile attack.

Drywanu- Approved.

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Re: Marwolaeth Cleddyf

Post by Hollrage on Sun Oct 05, 2014 6:12 pm

Done.
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Re: Marwolaeth Cleddyf

Post by Tsukiya Ishida on Sun Oct 05, 2014 7:30 pm

Approved.
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