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Azriel Strauss

Post by Talos Strauss on Sat Oct 04, 2014 11:30 am


Name: Azriel Straus

Biographical Information:
Age: 19
Birth Date: 1/10/872
Birthplace:
Relatives: Rebecca & Chronus Parents 3 siblings 2brothers 1 sister

Physical Description:
Gender: Male
Height: 5’10
Weight: 155lbs
General Description: Messy brown afro with an olive skin tone. Dark shadows under his hazel eyes.  He wears earrings which are small jade spheres with black with single black circle making them look like eyes.  He wears baggy cargo shorts, the bottom portions were torn off leaving them frayed.  His light blue t-shirt feature a halo set on fire at the center.  Over top he wears a checkered red shirt with sleeves rolled up.  For shoes he either wears wooden geta or is bare foot.  His facial expression is typically smirking, serious, disapproving.  However when he outside or just sees a nice view he softens and smiles.  His build is slim like someone who barely gets enough to eat but not sick looking.  His legs and arms have only a small amount of light brown hair.  Despite his life style his feet let like get pedicures and his teeth are remarkably clean and straight.


Personal Information:
Sexuality: Hetro
Personality: 250w Minimum As a boy he had deep fascination with the unknown.  He tended ask a lot of questions and spoke his mind.  He was also protective of others.  
Azriel is a foul mouth poor mannered temperamental young man.  This stems from his disregard for what society calls authority.  Azriel believes that no one is more important than anyone else and it is responsibility of individuals to provide for themselves.  It is also up to them to protect themselves.  Stealing is justifiable when you do it for survival, not to get ahead.  Although he doesn’t blame thieves who do it for the comfort of extra just the people who couldn’t protect there stuff.  In extension he can be quite political advocating for revolutionary overhaul of the system to allow for anarchy.   He tends to store up necessities and is likely to have a stash cache and a emergency bag to run. Azriel hates being indoors and would rather sleep outside in the rain than being confined in a room. The reason he likes the outdoors because as child he spent a lot of time confined with other people.  If he is a building or just in general Azriel will always have an exit strategy.  He enjoys nature and stares endlessly at the sky he still however isn’t used to being around people.  He takes things slowly and hates being rushed.  Being around a large amount of people makes him uncomfortable he is extremely secretive, private.  Azriel doesn’t care about superficial things such as clothing and titles.  He is not attached to material possessions and only sees jewelry as way to trade for something actually useful. Therefore will treat the head of the magic council no different that he treats the on the bum on the street.   He has a total disregard for rules and doesn’t care for the magic council.  He is conniving and opportunistic.  Azriel shows a soft spot for children, which manifest as tough love.  He believes that anyone can change their circumstances if they get off their lazy asses.

Magic Information:
Magic:Bounce Magic also known as Anti-Crash
Description: This is a caster type magic with defensive and supplementary properties.  That covers user or their limbs in a dome of magic that semi-malleable.    It can be thought of a trampoline and airbag magic.  The dome is opaque and the hue of the user’s magic color, light blue for Azriel.  
Advantages:  Bounce rebounds forces that meet it.  And lets the user jump higher and stride faster, by increasing distance of each stride through jumps.  At higher level when a fully body dome can be achieved it can serve as full body barrier and can encompass people in a fixed range.  By applying this magic to external surfaces others utilize its benefits. When cast externally a formula seal will be summoned on the area and disappear leaving a sheen of magic that mirrors the users color. Status affect that are cast on user with a full body dome are weaker.  By activating this magic just before striking it give it offensive utility (like an airbag).
Disadvantages & limits: Piercing attacks breach the dome  easier. This cannot be applied to other people in the sense that they can be granted the power to use or protect them. User can still fell things such as temperature.  This magic itself doesn't hurt however there is damage potential comes from how opposing forces rebound. Not back attacker like reflector and mirror magic, but away, like away a trampoline and airbag.
Spoiler:
An examples of how someone can be hurt indirectly by this magic.  If Azriel punched someone, with a Bounce fist then that target flew back further and faster because of the increased speed provided by Bounce.  Greater speed means more force, so if target slams against a wall then it will hurt them.



Chronological and Political Information:
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Guild: Mercenary
Background History: 500w MinimumBorn to Chronus and Rebecca Strauss.  He was the oldest of four children.  From the day he was born his parent hopes were placed on him and much responsibility.  As the oldest he was responsible for taking care of his sibling and breaks from school he would also spend time working the store.  It wasn’t until the age of 14 that Azriel met his uncle, Maalik.
Maalik was a mage and Rebecca’s brother.  He was very close to his sister but was always traveling.  Maalik was also the one who gave Azriel his name.  Being Maalik’s first nephew he had a special place in his heart.  The few times he visited seemed like the only escape the only relief that Azriel received.  His uncle magic specialty was Angel magic which is why he name Azriel after one.  Maalik would often stories with all of Rebecca’s children.  Many times would get into deep discussions of magic and the mysteries of the world the younger ones would enjoy the stories but fall asleep.  Not Azriel, he hung to every word.
It only took one visit from his uncle to be hooked on magic.  Azriel longed to take a journey of his own.  Dropping out of school he took up more hours at the shop.  His father protested but his mom thought it was a good thing, him working the shop tended to do well for business.  But this was just his way of scrapping together for a journey.  Azriel had spoken to his uncle about his plan.  It was his advice that he should spend this time learning to use magic and more importantly how it affected the world.  He told Azriel that there was magic everywhere and in everything.  It was possible to buy magic but it would be more beneficial to develop his own so that he could better connect with it. When the day had finally come to leave home he was 17.  He said his good buys to his siblings, even the youngest was oldest enough that they didn't need babysitting for his parents he left a note.
Traveling the world with no particular destination he lived a nomadic life un attached to possessions.  He never had much and didn't require physical goods to make him happy.  Azriel saw many people and had new experiences.  In his mind life truly hadn't began until he had left.
Traveling the world
Azriel had always heard stories of the world beyond his home.  But those stories didn’t paint a complete picture.  There was a lot more violence and poor than he knew of but the worst crime came from rich business owners and the government.  Azriel saw firsthand how they worked together.  One of the first people he met was a woman by the name of Camille.  She was tough but supportive.  Azriel never had an older sibling but often wondered if that was would have been like.  She should Azriel many things and trained him to fight.  It was through her tutelage that he honed his magic.  He was very proud of his accomplishment and it showed.  He would bounce about and smile all the time.  From time to time she would disappear and come with work together they would complete them together.  She kept most of the money though.  Azriel didn’t mind for him it was enough learning from and being with her.
It was on one of these that the pair faced their biggest and last mission together.  A job they had been improperly ranked, and detailed.  As a result they faced odds they weren’t prepared for.  End the end Azriel had attempted to shield Camille from the opponents attack.  Prepared to defend her he jumped front of her to block the attack, like he had done so often, she quickly grabbed him turning around him so it was her back that would meet the attack.  Camille had noticed the weakness of his magic before he did.  Because that attack would have pierced his magic he would have died if not for her.  Her last words to him were “Your supposed to be and an Angel of destruction, Baka!”  Smiling she squeezed his hand and drew her last breath.  The mage that killed her ran away.  Azriel doesn’t remember how long he stayed there but eventually.  Members of the magic council came and made their report and arrested Azriel for suspensions of collaboration with a terrorist.  After being interrogated through magical means and thirty days he was let go.
After seeing the woman he loved like a sister die before him he has become colder.  He come think that getting involved leads to getting hurt.  He blames his lack of strength for Camille’s death.  And he could protect himself then he couldn’t and should not protect anyone.  For Azriel everyone should live selfishly and sense that day he has.


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Re: Azriel Strauss

Post by Linedwell Rainrex on Wed Oct 08, 2014 4:12 pm

- You're missing your name at the beginning of the app. please add this

- The year is x891, so in order to be 19 you'd be born in the year of x872. You're also missing your birthplace as well. Please add these to the application.

- 150 words is the minimum for general appearance, you're only at 84 words at the moment.

- You're missing the "Magic: (Name your Primary magic.)" section of your magic description. please add this.

Bump when these changes are made.
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Re: Azriel Strauss

Post by Talos Strauss on Wed Oct 08, 2014 5:06 pm

Idk how the magic part was removed. Guess that is what happens when I have multiple versions
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Re: Azriel Strauss

Post by Linedwell Rainrex on Wed Oct 08, 2014 6:22 pm

Everything seems to be in line, but one thing I'd like to let you know is that your magic won't be allowed to reflect damage back onto your attacker. Reflecting attacks is something that's banned because of the banning of "Reflector Magic". So any variation of reflecting attacks is also banned as well. As far as your defenses go though, you are allowed to deflect things, meaning, that if something hits your defense it is deflected and sent flying off harmlessly into the distance (as long as this spell can't hurt anyone). When you've removed this from your magic, you'll be approved. Please, bump again once changes are made.
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Re: Azriel Strauss

Post by Talos Strauss on Wed Oct 08, 2014 9:19 pm

I don't see what your talking about I said specifically that this magic doesn't hurt anyone directly. And reiterated that it behaves like a trampoline and airbags not Mirror Magic or Reflector magic. Both of former of which disperse forces not send them back
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Re: Azriel Strauss

Post by Linedwell Rainrex on Wed Oct 08, 2014 10:41 pm

Talos Strauss wrote:More examples of how someone can be hurt indirectly by this magic.  The opponents own attack hits them
This is what I'm talking about. An opponent being hurt by their own attack isn't allowed.
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Re: Azriel Strauss

Post by Talos Strauss on Thu Oct 09, 2014 6:33 am

Ok fixed. Question could the attacks be bounced into a 3rd party?
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Re: Azriel Strauss

Post by Linedwell Rainrex on Thu Oct 09, 2014 8:49 am

No, the only thing that's allowed is that you're able to deflect attacks, meaning the attacks are harmless afterwards (to both you and any other party). Since the changes were made though, you're now approved.
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