Danny Fang, the wanderer

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Danny Fang, the wanderer

Post by Lucius Lorendo on Wed Nov 12, 2014 5:04 pm

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Name: His name is Lucius Lorendo.

Biographical Information:
Age: He is 55
Birth Date: (When were you born? Day, Month, Year. The current year is X891.) September 22, X845
Birthplace: Clover Town
Relatives: He was disowned by his family, therefore no longer has one.

Physical Description:
Gender: He is a male.
Height: 6'7
Weight: 140 pounds
General Description: 150w Minimum  Due to his height, he quite often slouches, slouches down enough that people like he's 6'5. He always has a toothpick in his mouth, in the left corner of his lip, and he's rarely seen without one. The real reason for it is because he likes chewing on it, rather then any sort of magic reason. He wears his hair down, and his hair is long enough to go down to the small of his back. He's 6'7, remember this, which makes his hair rather long. He wears a large white coat, with pockets on each side, around the rib area, he holds a box of toothpicks there. The number of toothpicks is unknown, although it's actually 34.

He wears blue pants. He has a face, a hardened face, but still a face. His body is bigger, although not exactly fat, but decently big and his arms are also decently long. His legs take up 3 feet of him, so they're long legs. He also has broad shoulders. He also has a lost eye, which he hides the socket with a weird eyepatch. The lost eye is his right eye. His eye that he has left, is amber in color, although not magical in any way.
Face Claim:
Face-claim of Stark from Bleach:
Personal Information:
Sexuality: He is Bisexual.
Personality: 250w Minimum   To start off, I'll give you what he is at heart. A giant teddy bear. He cares about most people, and would hate to kill someone. He also is willing to listen to anyones troubles, although he may not fully understand them, he'll still listen to them, for what it's worth. He will also lend a helping hand to those who wish, depending on the task, if it requires his size, why not? At least, that's his simple thought process. He's simple because he was risen as a child as a simple child. However, that's half of him.

He does have an issue with his personality, and that's with people he hates. He becomes the complete and utter opposite of what he is when he's normal. He doesn't listen, he's not willing to help, and he's wiling to kill, not that he usually can. Even he finds that slightly worrying, since it could one day spring out of control, but he can keep it under wraps fairly well, since he is fairly hard to anger. Due to being fairly hard to anger, he often allows people to say what they want, when they want, and why they want. It's him they're talking about, so what? If they're not true, they're not true.

He's also afraid of bugs. Very afraid of them. He had been since birth, and he doesn't know why. It's not like he's something they could eat, as it'd take 1000s of them to try, at least, normal sized bugs. He's also afraid of heights, and becomes paralyzed when up high, that's at least, if he knows he's up high.

Magic Information:
Magic: Elemental Control: Earth
Description: Using this magic, he can control the earth below him, and around him, to create walls and use to hit people with by it springing from the gruond.
Advantages: He can use it offensively and defensively.
Disadvantages: It's only earth that he can use this for, primarly dirt and rock.

Chronological and Political Information:
Alignment: (What is your character's alignment? Are they Lawful Good? Chaotic Good? Lawful Evil? No clue what that is? Click here and tadaa!) He's very much so Chaotic Neutral, not caring about much.
Guild: (What guild is your character a part of? If your character is not in a guild, simply put Mercenary.) Mercenary
Background History: 500w Minimum
Lucius' Start:


Lucius was born to Kayle and Zachery Lorendo, a older couple that just wanted a kid. Along with him came his brother, Kaye Lorendo. Him and his brother got along right from the start, which the parents took as a good omen. The kids were decently smart, and Lucius and Kaye were always interested in magic. They searched it, looked a books, even at ages they couldn't understand the words, they looked and looked at it.

When they were put into school, they learned mainly how to read. That's what they took out of it anyway. Lucis main journey starts at the age of 15.

The death of his brother, and the loss of his eye.:
When he was 15, he and his brother went and did a mission for someone. Lucius forgets who, but he remembers the simple mission.

Send a letter to a man.

That was the entire mission. What they didn't know, is it was a trap. Not a trap for anyone in particular, but for anyone stupid enough to fall for it, or at least, someone who would fall for a mission that is so simple as it. They got to the place they were told to deliver it, and were suddenly surrounded by a group of 8 men. Some had weapons, others didn't. They were out-numbered, and only Luci had his magic fully available at the time. Luci would use it to his advantage.

At least, he would've right away, if one of the men haden't spoken, "Heh. So this is what boss has sent for us to deal with. Weaklings? They better have money on them."

Luci sprung into action, having grown all the way to 6'7 now, he was surprisingly not going for punches, rather he did a spell-circle which brought up a  rectangle of dirt into on of the mens chest, and then one more into anothers. Two got to him, and he fought them both with less then skilled hand to hand. He was able to beat one of them, and then the other stabbed him in the eye, the eye being taken with on the way out. While this pained him, well, more like made him scream, he took the man in front of him and fought him. His brother was dead behind him, although his brother had taken 4 people with him.

After the fight ended, Lucius fell foward, and crawled to his brother. Crying through the one eye he had left. Yelling that his brother shouldn't have died, and cursed whatever god there was out there that did this. Thankfully, the men who would wake up from the affair would run.

There's not much more of his story to tell, besides that he got disowned for not protecting his brother. He has been wandering ever since, although is currently in Clover town.


Last edited by Danny Fang on Thu Nov 13, 2014 4:18 pm; edited 1 time in total

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Re: Danny Fang, the wanderer

Post by Tsukiya Ishida on Thu Nov 13, 2014 12:57 pm

Two things.

The first, is your character's name Lucius or Danny? Either way, you'll have to make edits to your app where one or the other is mentioned.

The second is your magic. As of now, it seems that you are trying to have earth magic along with have metal manipulation. While realistically manipulating metal because of its earthen property would be viable, here earth magic and metal/steel magic are treated separately. With that being said, you need to decide on whether this magic is earth magic or metal/steel magic. Later on if you want to have a second magic you may do so at B-rank after purchasing a secondary magic slot and the accompanying magic.

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Re: Danny Fang, the wanderer

Post by Lucius Lorendo on Thu Nov 13, 2014 4:19 pm

Sorry about that, didn't know. It's fixed now, Bump.

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Re: Danny Fang, the wanderer

Post by Tsukiya Ishida on Thu Nov 13, 2014 5:15 pm

Approved, I'll have to change your username to match your character name.
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